As Long As The Protagonist Wants Something,

I Hate Vacations. There's Nothing To Do.

All Rhetorical Questions Are Accusations.

The True Writer Must Write Not The Acceptable But The True.

All Of Us. All Of Us. We're Doomed.

Don't Write Stage Directions. If It Is Not Apparent What The Character Is Trying To Accomplish By Saying The Line, Tell Us How The Character Said It Or Whether Or Not She Moved To The Couch Isn't Going To Aid The Case.