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Never Use An Adverb To Modify The Verb 'said' . . . He Admonished Gravely. To Use An Adverb This Way (or Almost Any Way) Is A Mortal Sin. The Writer Is Now Exposing Himself In Earnest, Using A Word That Distracts And Can Interrupt The Rhythm Of The Exchange.

Skip The Boring Parts.

Not Dreams But Night Changes, Not Destiny But Path Changes, Always Keep Your Hopes Alive, Luck May Or May Not Change, But Time Definitely Chages.

Never Use The Words 'suddenly' Or 'all Hell Broke Loose.'

The Line Of Dialogue Belongs To The Character; The Verb Is The Writer Sticking His Nose In.